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Time In Between 
27th-Jul-2010 11:13 pm
Purple Tights
Title: Time In Between
Disclaimer: The characters are the property of J.K. Rowling.
Author: Spirit
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 100
Challenge: #224 - Tangled
Author’s Note: Feeling emotionally tangled, personally. Needed a distraction. Sorry it's not entirely decent or possibly even coherent.



An emotional mess. A tangled mass of love-me, love-me, loveme, panted all night long.

Severus slides his hand over Harry's mouth, cutting off sharp intakes of breath. Tonight, they are two shadows combining as one.

"What about your wife?" He asks on an upward thrust. "And your children?"

Harry responds in soft moans.

Severus is already addicted. Already lost.

They have sex over and over until they're making love. Tangled limbs. Tangled sheets. Tangled emotions. They ebb and flow together through the night. One night. One room. Only once.

In the morning, Harry escapes to his family.

Severus does not.

28th-Jul-2010 03:51 am (UTC)
This is one of the best 100 I have ever read.
28th-Jul-2010 11:17 am (UTC)
Quite a compliment, thank you.
28th-Jul-2010 03:59 am (UTC)
Oh wow.
That's fabulous. One day Harry will stay. :)
28th-Jul-2010 11:42 am (UTC)
He will. One night would never be enough. Thanks for reading :)
28th-Jul-2010 04:38 am (UTC)
Bad Harry! Great 100 words!
28th-Jul-2010 11:47 am (UTC)
Thank you! Harry just needed to be selfish for one night. Severus understands this because he understands Harry.
28th-Jul-2010 05:52 am (UTC)
Wonderful. Beautiful and sad.
28th-Jul-2010 11:55 am (UTC)
Thank you. We only get one chance at true happiness. Blink and you miss it.
28th-Jul-2010 06:53 am (UTC)
As always, it's lovely. So sad and evocative at once. I had a little thrill when I saw it was you. ♥
28th-Jul-2010 12:07 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading :). The course of true love never did run smooth. One night will become a thousand others. They're already falling in love. You make me smile to see your reviews. And think. ♣
28th-Jul-2010 08:52 am (UTC)
Ouch. Yes, sad. Poor Severus.
28th-Jul-2010 12:09 pm (UTC)
Ah yes. Harry will be back. Severus is counting on this. Thanks for reading :)
28th-Jul-2010 08:54 am (UTC)
One day Severus won't be alone in the morning, cause Harry will stay, brilliant drabble :)
28th-Jul-2010 12:11 pm (UTC)
A lot of hearts will get broken, but their love is worth it. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
28th-Jul-2010 11:58 am (UTC)
One night. One room. Only once. OMG

28th-Jul-2010 01:00 pm (UTC)
Thank you :)
28th-Jul-2010 02:22 pm (UTC)
WOW - am in awe. Your use of repetition and symmetry is breath-taking!
28th-Jul-2010 07:34 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I do the best I can with 100 words :)
28th-Jul-2010 05:53 pm (UTC)
Oh, that was fabulous. One day, Harry will stay. *wibbles*
28th-Jul-2010 07:36 pm (UTC)
Thank you. One day he will of course. He left his heart in the room that next morning *wink*.
29th-Jul-2010 03:27 am (UTC)
i like this very much. and i like that harry gets to have a family AND snape :D it's good to have options - he already proved that he has a great capability of love hee :)

29th-Jul-2010 03:45 am (UTC)
Infidelity is never a good thing, mind you. But Snape is his heart. It's good that if he has to have a wife and children, he now also knows he does have Snape as an option! Thanks for reading.
2nd-Aug-2010 06:05 pm (UTC)
WOW! *is speechless*
2nd-Aug-2010 10:45 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Specchless is a huge compliment for me :D
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